There she comes again
back to canoodle me
fondling me all over
judging me hazy
There she comes again
back into my mind
unfurling her wings
driving me blind
There she comes again
back into my soul
inflicting pain and pleasure
wheedling me to cajole
There she comes again
back into my spirit
dispelling my life
trancing me to forfeit
There she comes again
back into my heart
hurting like a splinter
tearing me apart
There she comes again
back into my arms
snuggling me around
wooing me to disarm
There she comes again
back into my skin
yearning my vice
seducing me to spin
There she comes again
back into my ear
twisting and swirling around
inducing me to endear
There she comes again
back into the smell
aromating her scent
impelling me like a spell
There she comes again
back into my lips
redeeming my temptation
sensing my eclipse
There she comes again
back into my eye
flourishing and fading
without bidding me goodbye . . .
12 comments:
heehee!!! nice one.
dont worry...she'll come again:P
:) :) :)
u jus HAV to PUT this in ur finest collection Vol 2!!!
this one's fabuloussss!!!
very nice!
n..ur talkin bout da wind rite??? awww..let her kno bout it..she'll b escatic!
no i am NOT TALKING about the WIND or about a GIRL ! or maybe i am
think again ;) heh!
but yeah nice thinking....thts wat i like about poems they are trascending in nature....n they can they can relate to u in more than one plane n can draw parallel to mnay htings in life.....;)
awsome........aayush at his best!! keep waiting she will surely come again:))..or has she already....TREAT aayush treat!!!!
:P ok..whoeva u meant! (oh, nw um gettin ideas! :D ) i hope she comes again!
n yes..v r all in for da treat ok!
treat treat treat!
well as a so called new found "POET" (lolZzz)
i will say "ALL OF YOU ARE CORRECT".
hehe
n no i dont owe a treat to any of u but u all owe me a treat for this bful poem! :P (luk wat u made me do tejal n twinkle!!! u made me brag BAD GURLS :P)
n yes i m equally gud/bad at verbosity which evr u c it(nirvan);)
in2 d world of romance...at its fullest...yet d pain of separation...
i think this is a really nice piece of work.. but somewhere one can find an obvious deliberation to keep up the rhyme.. otherwise, the idea it is meant to convey, it surely does..
absolutely no deliberate rhyming....
sometime, when you write something, esp at the right moment and under the necessary conditions, words just come to you :)
this was one such wonderful occasion.
i wish it would happen more often
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